I know it's not your primary focus, but I'm still ecstatic to see you try your hand at writing once again. I feel like you bring the same sort of intense perspective to the roles of small and helpless characters that I try to do for the giantesses I write about, and more than anyone else's work I've been exposed to, your narrative voice seizes the reader and brings them instantly into your world and they feel what your characters feel.

You've done some longer pieces in the past and I loved them, but this story plays to your strengths wonderfully. The emotional intensity remains constant and while I've gone back and forth on my thoughts regarding your ending, I think leaving your narrator's horrible sense of betrayal mostly unspoken works well for an insightful reader. If I have any criticism at all, it would be that you may be asking your readers to make more of a leap to really empathize with the narrator's emotional state in his final moments, but even as I type this, I'm not sure what the most effective way to do that would be.

Finally, I'm left with so many questions about this woman and the world she lives in. It seems like she's familiar with the existence of tiny people by her reaction, and of course that reaction is just the sort of thing to get my attention. If you planned to do any further exploration of her story or the world surrounding these events, this is a spectacular hook to grab your readers' interest.

Well done, S0ren. You're a true size fetish Renaissance man.